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We have been learning about similes and our task was to create a simile poem to describe an object with saying what that object is. We first thought of descriptive words for the object, then thought of other nouns that we could compare these adjectives to, to create our similes.
That's a great poem it really mystified me. I like the way you didn't go off topic and set a question to the reader about what the , It Only Unlocks One Thing, is! Your class has been learning a lot about poems and similes. You've also used a lot of descriptive words and fun useful similes throughout the poem.
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ReplyDeleteGreat poem!
ReplyDeleteThat's a great poem it really mystified me. I like the way you didn't go off topic and set a question to the reader about what the , It Only Unlocks One Thing, is! Your class has been learning a lot about poems and similes. You've also used a lot of descriptive words and fun useful similes throughout the poem.
ReplyDeleteWell done this was well described, you helped me picture this in my head. Well done room 12 and Riley, keep up the great work, Sam :)
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