We have been learning about ANZAC during class. For writing this week we have focused on vocabulary and painting a picture in the audience's head while they read. We followed a plan to write our poems and then we changed the font to a script and stained them with tea for effect.
Emma's ANZAC Poem:
A Soldier's Life At War
Unable to take one step covered in mud,
Seeing men coughing, in pain unable to sit or stand up,
Sprinting away trying to save my self,
Trying to get some rest without ending up in the hospital or dead,
All of us on the battlefield not able to recognize where we are or what's going on,
Not able to realise all of the gas shells falling behind me,
Were moving like drunk, sick men,
Painful feet with cuts and no boots or shoes,
There is poisonous gas around me I put on my gasmask do the others know?
Getting my mask on with all the energy I can muster,
Hearing a weak man yelling and screaming as the gas goes down his throat and into his lungs,
Being blinded and killed in seconds,
Not seeing your mates through the big, green clouds.
Hoping that they aren't lying somewhere helpless.
I watch my comrade come through the smoke seeing him cough as the gas goes through his lungs,
I know that he will die seeing him suffer was the worst part I will never forget this moment of life,
Imagine what it would be like carrying a young comrade to a wagon watching him suffer and die.
The young blond haired males face turned red then purple and white becoming a ghost,
He uses some of his last energy saying,
“ Take care of my wife and children, tell them that love them.”
His body relaxers as I put him the wagon,
That starts to move on uneven ground,
Forcing his lungs start to turn to blood and snot,
Green snot made by his insides.
Have you been in any pain or watched someone suffer like that,
Nobody would think that it’s glorious to die in the war especially not by gas,
It is a nightmare to experience the war or to be hiding from gas shells and bombs.
Nobody should have to hide from their fears not been able to have fun hopping your family is alive.
Zara's ANZAC Poem:
Sickness had crept in, men are coughing like crazy.
Our legs weak, muddy bodies are unable to move.
Fighting the pain as you reach safety where you can rest.
You got away from the front line
Men are filled with horrendous bruises, cuts and grazes
We are walking like drunken men
Boots gone and uniform ripped to shreds
A strange smell grabs our air away in surprise
Gas! We grab our masks and throw them over our bruised heads
We just manage to put them on in time
Then we her a thrilling cry, “Gas in lungs !” a man shouted
He lay on the floor as gas was filling up his lungs
He took his last breath before dying in pain.
The thick pea soup gas was making your helmet fog up
That made it impossible to see your comrades.
Then you sense a fellow soldier come rushing towards you.
You feel totally helpless and when you look down you see a comrade choking.
Just imagine all this in one day
Nothing but another soldier dying in front of your eyes.
We pick up his limp and battered body and carry it to the wagon.
We place him in the wagon and he honestly looks so tortured and frightened.
I really thought it couldn’t get any worse
His body bouncing up and down every time the wagon goes over a bump
The gas is literally turning his lungs into mucus and blood
He is getting further away but you can still see his face in so much pain.
The memories of this day are with me wherever I go.
Even after all these years I can feel all that pain
It is a sight and sound that will never ever leave your mind.
So do you think it is glorious to die for your country ?
By Zara






